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Does this frustrate you too?

8 December 2022 ยท Written and published by Dean Moon on LinkedIn

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Does this frustrate you too?

When you get a cold outreach

The assailant opens with any number of the following:

"Hey, question..."
"I thought I'd just share..."
"Did you know that..."
"[Name], I'm writing to let you know..."
"Your competitor is using us..."
"Want to increase [insert metric]..."

Then followed by:

"Pitch, pitch, pitch, pitch, pitch, pitch..."
"Blah, blah, blah, blah, blah, blah..."

๐Ÿ˜–๐Ÿคฌ๐Ÿ˜ค๐Ÿคฏ

There is a right way, and a wrong way to cold outreach...

Let's start with the wrong way๐Ÿ‘‡

- Too assumptive
- No introduction
- Too casual
- Too formal
- Pitching out the gate
- Not personalised
- Too aggressive
- Not aggressive enough!
- No posture
- Too much posture

Most BDRs and AEs get sloppy in outreach.

Using templates is fine, but EVERYONE uses templates!

๐—–๐—ผ๐˜‚๐—น๐—ฑ ๐˜„๐—ฒ ๐—น๐—ฒ๐—ฎ๐—ฟ๐—ป ๐˜€๐—ผ๐—บ๐—ฒ๐˜๐—ต๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐—ณ๐—ฟ๐—ผ๐—บ ๐—œ๐—ป๐—ถ๐—ด๐—ผ ๐— ๐—ผ๐—ป๐˜๐—ผ๐˜†๐—ฎ'๐˜€ ๐—ฎ๐—ฝ๐—ฝ๐—ฟ๐—ผ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐—ต ๐—ณ๐—ฟ๐—ผ๐—บ ๐˜๐—ต๐—ฒ '๐—ฃ๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ฐ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€ ๐—•๐—ฟ๐—ถ๐—ฑ๐—ฒ?'

Inigo:

"Hello.
My name is Ingio Montoya.
You killed my father.
Prepare to die."

๐—œ๐—ป๐—ถ๐—ด๐—ผ'๐˜€ ๐—ด๐˜‚๐—ถ๐—ฑ๐—ฒ ๐˜๐—ผ ๐—ป๐—ฒ๐˜๐˜„๐—ผ๐—ฟ๐—ธ๐—ถ๐—ป๐—ด ๐˜€๐˜‚๐—ฐ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ๐˜€๐˜€:

โ€ข Polite greeting
โ€ข Name
โ€ข Relevant personal link
โ€ข Manage expectations

The truth is, there is no silver bullet to cold outreach.

๐—–๐—ผ๐—ป๐˜€๐—ถ๐˜€๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ป๐—ฐ๐˜† & ๐—ฝ๐—ฟ๐—ฎ๐—ฐ๐˜๐—ถ๐—ฐ๐—ฒ ๐—บ๐—ฎ๐—ธ๐—ฒ๐˜€ ๐—ฎ ๐—ฏ๐—ฒ๐˜๐˜๐—ฒ๐—ฟ ๐—ฑ๐—ผ๐—ผ๐—ฟ ๐—ผ

๐—ฝ๐—ฒ๐—ป๐—ฒ๐—ฟ.

Lazy sequencing, lack of detail and personalisation are all too common today.

Read what you send, would you respond?

Credit to James Zhang for inspiring this one!

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